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Post by Shiro on Jul 20, 2009 21:43:32 GMT -5
Accepted. :]
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DJAtomika
Civilian
Oh no you didn't.
Posts: 47
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Post by DJAtomika on Jul 21, 2009 8:40:03 GMT -5
Also, Shiro, how come you haven't moved my guy into the accepted forum yet?
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Post by Shiro on Jul 21, 2009 12:47:12 GMT -5
What do you mean? Like make a profile for him? Because I want you to so you can leave out or add whatever you want.
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DJAtomika
Civilian
Oh no you didn't.
Posts: 47
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Post by DJAtomika on Jul 28, 2009 1:38:25 GMT -5
I meant into the Characters subforum. Since you've accepted my profile, I thought you'd move it, like the other profiles.
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Roogan
Civilian
rawr meow lick
Posts: 10
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Post by Roogan on Sept 11, 2009 4:30:26 GMT -5
USER INFO Name: Logan Age: 15 RPE: Low rping of this kind-(I think ) CHAR INFOName: Roogan Even Age: 15 Bio: From when there where no zombies| He trains in how to use a sword, that he has been doing that since he was a small kid, hangs out with his girlfriend/"wife", Cassie ("Even" cuz she likes to think of them as husband and wife, and he her) he loves her more the anything, also loved running and jumping off of stuff, and going onto the rooftops. But in the days right before the real zombie problem, Cassie seemed to go insane. Not the crazy yelling kind, but the sad, lost kind never talking kind. Roogan almost lost it him self when that happened to her, but stayed sane by telling himself "What does Cassie want?" and still went to see her almost every day. Ever since then he loved starting fires... | Start of outbreak | When he first heard the news, he took his sword and headed out to Cassie's home to see if her mom, pa, and little sis are ok, but Cassie was being taken by her dad to get a mental check up) . Thats when he saw it. A "Cannibal" about to kill her little sis (age 7) then he "clicked" into what he calls "The Flow" and saved her in a way that she calls "AW-SOME NINJA SUMTHIN" ever since that time whenever he does anything important he "flows" and people who see him seem to think of him as ninja-ish, mostly cuz he has a sword a runs on the roofs. Cassie's family (but her and her dad) left on a buddy's small plane. And he will be coming back for Cassie, her dad, Roogan and his mom and dad( who he hasn't seen since he left) in ---- number of days. Looks: Light skin tone| Dark hoodie| White jeans| Has a gold shaded 'happy ring' from Cassie| RPPE: I looked around, I saw a human trying to fool the zombies into thinking he was one of them (and it seemed to be workin for now.....). But im in a rush, so I may not be able to help him, if needed. I looked for a fast way to take the zombs out from the roof Im on.. then I felt it, the Flow, telling me about the street lights, there on, theres a gas tank below. If I break the light the sparks could.... Gear: A sword| A hoodie with lots of pockets on the inside and jeans| A ring with a happy face engraved on it | A lighter (mwahahaha)| A small knife sharpener modded to work on his sword| And two pics of Cassie, one of her sane and eating cake, one of her insane.... z-z-z-ZAMBY
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Roogan
Civilian
rawr meow lick
Posts: 10
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Post by Roogan on Sept 13, 2009 17:58:42 GMT -5
USER INFO Name: Logan Age: 15 RPE: low of this kind
CHAR INFO Name: Cassie Lane/Even Age: 15 Bio: In love with Roogan, to the point of taking on his last name, Even. One of her fav things is cake, she likes it so much that she keeps small cakes in her pockets. Shes kind, nice, blunt and smart, she is ok at hand to hand fighting, but other then that not that good at fighting. Then a few days before the zombies got in the city, she just stoped talking, or responding to people at all.
Looks: Brown hair | Light skin tone | Wears a blue hoodie and black jeans | And has a ring she carved a happy face into, that she calls a happy ring |
RPPE: ...What..was i doing?...I was looking for something...I could at least look around, as I looked around I noticed that I was in the street, I saw a fire a bit away,(But dident notice the people around it)...What is that?...Its looking at me...Is it what i was looking for?...No...Is it mad at me? "I'm sorry". I dont think it heard me because it made some bad noises..."I'm sorry!"... Its coming closer... I took a small cake out of my pocket and handed it to it....I think it understood that because it stoped coming and started eating the cake...What... was I doing? I was looking for something...That boy...was it him? It must be..thats the only thing i can recall...
Gear: A hoodie with big pockets for small cakes | Jeans | Some small cakes | A happy ring |2$ and 3$ in cents
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Post by Shiro on Sept 15, 2009 10:26:34 GMT -5
Nope, sorry, Logan, the characters are fine, but you need to learn proper capitalization and punctuation before I can accept you here.
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Roogan
Civilian
rawr meow lick
Posts: 10
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Post by Roogan on Sept 15, 2009 13:04:44 GMT -5
lol soz, i think i fixed it, (ha i want to play) o, by the way, Hi.
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Post by Shiro on Sept 15, 2009 18:55:29 GMT -5
Spelling, grammar and third person are next.
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Roogan
Civilian
rawr meow lick
Posts: 10
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Post by Roogan on Sept 15, 2009 21:12:15 GMT -5
Huh? I only used third person for the bio, cuz its the bio and it does not have to be 1st person, as for spelling, i used the built in spell check(but i think it may be confused) and I'm not too good at spelling , but the spell check said it was fine... and i just don't know about the last prob with it...i'll look it over again-again but i didn't see any big probs. p.s. the "AW-SOME NINJA SUMTHIN" is like that cuz its coming from a 7 year old, and i wanted to show that more in her words.
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Post by Shiro on Sept 16, 2009 15:18:05 GMT -5
Are you a native English speaker or is English your second language?
So far with the grammar, writing style, and spelling, as well as using first person in the role play examples and your overuse of ellipses, I cant accept you.
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Roogan
Civilian
rawr meow lick
Posts: 10
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Post by Roogan on Sept 16, 2009 23:27:49 GMT -5
native, and thats why I dont know what your talking about. It could be we just talk diffrently, but i don't think theres any real reason to not let me play, the way i type isn't that big a problem. its understandable, and thats what matters right? if anything is a real problem then the other players would tell me right? so can i plz just play your AW-SUM rp? (lolz)
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Post by Shiro on Sept 22, 2009 16:16:34 GMT -5
Yes, we speak differently, but proper English is a must for this site. Your posts look horrible:
-Capitalization -Correct punctuation -Correct grammar -Correct spelling
Your posts should not look like a narrative, they should look like a paragraph from a novel.
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Roogan
Civilian
rawr meow lick
Posts: 10
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Post by Roogan on Sept 23, 2009 1:54:54 GMT -5
well i have fixed them a bit since my last post before last, and if your talking about the spelling thats ooc i dont care for that. i only care about the IC post stuffs so plz only care about that. but i AM righting it like a book. i know this cuz iv done story stuff before. the spelling may be suckish cuz im realy not that good at it. but id say that this isent that bad. but all the other stuff is fine, and spelling isent that inportant. it seems we just dont see eye to eye on this. i think its time to ask the other players what thay think. i think that means time for a poll/or-some-thing! we can both be ok with that right? should i (somehow) fix my stuff, or should i be able to play? if i need to fix stuff, then what?
P.S. yea, i think your built in spellchecker is a bit confused
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Post by Shiro on Sept 30, 2009 0:32:55 GMT -5
The site does not have a built in spell check.
I care about both IC and OOC grammar and spelling because this site is dedicated to literature as well as role playing.
If you cannot learn how to speak, spell, punctuate, and capitalize correctly then I cannot rant you access to the site.
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